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mimeticgel From: mimeticgel Date: December 7th, 2003 10:56 am (UTC) (Link)
The photos are nice but I feel you are relying on “gimmick” rather than composition of shot.

The police man shot might have been better from a wider angle so we could see what he was looking at and also the person who’s face we see through the window.

The bull is the better picture as it is representing something. The speed & power of the bull trapped within the statue while those who are trapped within the shopping centre appear to be free.

The balloons appear to be too much of a mess.

The car lights also does not appear to have a context. Now a long exposure with say a train stood still while cars wiz past would be good, or for the more green streams of busses while the traffic stays still.

My suggestion for improvement would be to think of the story, the thousand words that your picture will tell.
22 lies or Lie to me