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kneeshooter
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21 lies or Lie to me
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nyarbaggytep From: nyarbaggytep Date: October 26th, 2004 04:14 am (UTC) (Link)

Nitpicking - hopefully useful

I think I would have had your lovely model lower his chin and brows and tilt his face downwards a bit on the second one, and a greater depth of field would have allowed you to focus on his face as well as the boot. Alternatively less depth of field would have made it clearer where you were focussing. I would also have straightened the sheet under his feet so as not to detract from the boots.

The first one I can find nothing to complain about.

I actually really like both of them though. The pose on the second one is lovely for showing off the outfit.
kneeshooter From: kneeshooter Date: October 26th, 2004 04:25 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Nitpicking - hopefully useful

All good points.

I suppose I'd better come clean and admit the second one was posed by ingenue_the - not me at all - and as you imply to show off the boots and jacket rather than the model (who might well be anonymised for the final pic she's going to use). I just did a bit of Photoshop and some basic camera positioning.

The first one was just cropped a tiny bit from the original image. I did experiment a little with cropping to change the vertical position of the nipple, but in the end left it pretty much where it was shot.
21 lies or Lie to me